We presented our pitch in front of our class and we got back both positive and things that would've made it even better.
Positives:
- Good detailed pitch which covered all aspects
- Fixed developmental ideas
- Well researched styling ideas for artists
- Well organised
- Well presented and well prepared
- The idea is very strong
- Clear distinction between original and inspirational artist
- Good narrative
- Good brand image
- Found clear inspiration
Things to Improve:
- Animatic good but could be improved
- Visually showed some of the test shots
- Storyboard should be clearer
- Shot list needs to be more detailed
- Update production schedule
- Testing of After Effects and Colour Grading
In response to the feedback that we got, we're going to redo and update all the aspects that need to be done. However, we aren't planning on using after effects and colour grading unless we find that we need to incase the footage needs to be retouched.
Questions we got:
- Will the tattoos be visible in the video?
Yes, they will be seen in the video as well as the album cover.
- Have you tried out the slow motion or GoPro?
Not as of yet
Overall, we got a 8/10 from our peers for our pitch.
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